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	<title>Comments on: The Wet Paint Manifesto</title>
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	<description>Art, technology, and hype from the desk of Brandon Rickman</description>
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		<title>By: Jean Kearns Miller</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jean Kearns Miller</dc:creator>
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		<description>Hi Brandon. I teach writing at a community college and begin my Comp I class with a wet paint sign and the (trick) question, &quot;Is this good writing?&quot; I usually compare it with something like: &quot;Because this wall has recently been painted it is necessary for you to avoid contact with it in order to protect your clothes from stains.&quot; Point being fluent sentence-writing is sometimes bad writing. Blah-blah-blah. So I come upon your wet paint manifesto and I find it addresses whether good writing--like the wet paint sign--can really be good if it&#039;s misleading. Would you mind my using it in my course pack? I can&#039;t pay you anything and I get no royalty from the course pack. If yes, how would you like to be acknowledged? I mean other than &quot;Printed by permission of the author.&quot;  (Any PR message?) Let me know.
Jean at Washtenaw Community College in Ann Arbor, Michigan
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Brandon. I teach writing at a community college and begin my Comp I class with a wet paint sign and the (trick) question, &#8220;Is this good writing?&#8221; I usually compare it with something like: &#8220;Because this wall has recently been painted it is necessary for you to avoid contact with it in order to protect your clothes from stains.&#8221; Point being fluent sentence-writing is sometimes bad writing. Blah-blah-blah. So I come upon your wet paint manifesto and I find it addresses whether good writing&#8211;like the wet paint sign&#8211;can really be good if it&#8217;s misleading. Would you mind my using it in my course pack? I can&#8217;t pay you anything and I get no royalty from the course pack. If yes, how would you like to be acknowledged? I mean other than &#8220;Printed by permission of the author.&#8221;  (Any PR message?) Let me know.<br />
Jean at Washtenaw Community College in Ann Arbor, Michigan</p>
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